Overall, I think
I did well on my assignment. I have written multiple analytical essays during
my senior year of high school. With that being said, I felt like I was
prepared. I used a flawless system that involves statements, proof, and
commentary. I only hope I’m not the only one that feels I did well.
I especially enjoyed the fact that
we had a wide range of places that we could choose to observe. I was able to
observe the football stadium. Football is my passion; I am pursuing a career in
the industry. With that being said, I feel I was more motivated to write my
paper and make it great because I was writing about something I love. When you
write about something you love, you find it more intriguing and not as dreadful
as other papers and assignments.
One thing I struggled with was
understanding how to look at the stadium through a different lens. I think a
lot of students had a problem with this. However, once I asked the professor to
give me a different explanation, I knew what I needed to do. The biggest
problem I had with my paper was going into a deeper analysis on some topics in
my paper for which I don’t think you could get any deeper on them. I feel some
things don’t have deeper meaning; it is what it is; plain and simple. For
example, I explained how the stadium had advertisements on display for everyone
to see. ASU did this because they are business savvy; advertisements are to
promote business; plain and simple. However, I do think ASU has a partnership
with some of these companies and that is explained in my paper.
There are some things about my
writing process that I will be changing. I think these changes will only be for
the better. For my future assignments, I will ask peer reviewers to not only
give me positive feedback but also a lot negative feedback as well. Knowing
what others think you should improve on is crucial in editing your draft. It
makes you consider other peoples ideas that may make your paper better. I will
also be creating a lot more drafts for which I believe the more drafts you
make, the more flaws you will find that you can fix. If you can fix more flaws,
your paper will be better. Creating more drafts will also make a stronger
structure for your final draft, making it a stronger paper overall.
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